regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-05/10:46 AM
funny
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-05/10:47 AM
If only you could find a way to introduce some ass buggery.
Re: Beetwen by Dovina	7-Mar-05/10:50 AM
metamorphose? Of course, this is bunk, but you know that. Points for different, but then you could use that fucked up font...what the fuck is it called?............Wingdings, and make it completely illegible.
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	7-Mar-05/10:53 AM
Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
Re: The Reply by LintyWeenis	7-Mar-05/10:56 AM
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL	8-Mar-05/9:59 AM
yah. this gives me a chubby.
Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Mar-05/5:32 PM
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	9-Mar-05/7:22 AM
one pause to mimic.... I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	9-Mar-05/7:29 AM
NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream! Give it to me!
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	9-Mar-05/4:16 PM
of a tractor's or of tractors'
Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus	10-Mar-05/10:46 AM
how about "borne on her tears? " I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more. there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
Re: Memories by RION12	12-Mar-05/10:02 AM
piles
Re: bleeding by crooked_smile	12-Mar-05/10:03 AM
frightful
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Mar-05/9:14 AM
Thank you for not trying to rhyme in this one.
Re: The Because Collection by INTRANSIT	14-Mar-05/6:51 AM
52 card pick-up
Re: an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle	14-Mar-05/7:14 AM
This is almost completely illegible. Is English your native language? (I hope not)
Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle	14-Mar-05/5:29 PM
This is a bulging turnip. "Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean? their? "their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase. clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite	14-Mar-05/5:33 PM
A G Q X R Z T G G W T s i q x u g g w w a a
Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite	14-Mar-05/5:34 PM
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Re: Peridot by horus8	15-Mar-05/8:55 AM
One of my favorites by you. Right up there with Temporal, imho