poemranker ::an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle

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an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear)

Member since 2005 · Posted 4 Mar 2005 · 7 comments

it getting annoying hereing the US crying, continually grieving their losses on 9/11, tragic - it is unfair - it is but something that very few must deal life - it is not in comparison to the rest of the world America has lost so little lives to war sponsored causes that we really ought to be counting our blessing right now, people in Baghdad don't have electricty elections dont make people free and I don't care how tragic you think that september was, they lost more people in Russia, we would have to have four septemeber 11th a day every day for four years before they numbers would match, so please be kind enough to suck it up and finish what you started, but then move on to things that are worthy of your time you've made a name for yourself, and people are depending on you so stop stuffing you self help books down the throats of people who hate you

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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 11-Mar-05/3:34 PM Reply
Nice Bias, way to go you with eveness and balance. Now, do us all a favor, and add a few more points to your overall score by proof reading before you post. I didn't catch any spelling errors, but a crapload of inproper tense, and other bits that I had to decipher the lay of the text before they made sense. They really hurt this.

<3 Jason -7-
[10] zodiac 11-Mar-05/10:24 PM Reply
Yesterday my Iraqi barber explained it to me this way:

During Saddam's time, all cigarette lighters in Iraq cost 10 cents. If a merchant tried to sell a lighter for 11 cents, Saddam's police would come and kill him. That's protection. True story.
[n/a] i_am_the_popsicle › zodiac 12-Mar-05/5:18 PM Reply
no one is commending saddam here, though perhaps the women should............(they got more rights then they do now).........
[10] zodiac › i_am_the_popsicle 12-Mar-05/10:43 PM Reply
What do you mean by "here"? Are you in Iraq?
[n/a] i_am_the_popsicle › zodiac 13-Mar-05/10:48 AM Reply
no i was referring to the group of posters,
[n/a] edpeterson 14-Mar-05/7:14 AM Reply
This is almost completely illegible. Is English your native language? (I hope not)
[n/a] i_am_the_popsicle › edpeterson 30-Mar-05/3:56 PM Reply
im sorry that you cant read this (hope your not judging the writing section on the new sat) but honestly, why should you even care

hope for things that are worth hoping for sir

(and i must say, after a review of comments you have left in various places, i must say you are a cynical ass who is rotten and entirely proud of it)