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Peridot (Free verse) by horus8
I believe in a lot of strange things,
But you, my gem, are from outer space
Hair so black I can't find where
It stops being you, and becomes -
- The night. Star-eyes, vibrating
With atomic need, and life, such as -
- I've never seen -- Been colors,
Thousands of light years away,
From where I begin each day;
Without you. I recall you smelled
Of fresh green apples and afternoon -
- Cut grass. And could you dance
A tornado, I thought, taking
Men, women, and children away
By the armful, by the song
What went wrong had absolutely
Nothing to do with either of us
I am a volcano, you are an ocean
I am a spider, you are the web
I am a mountain, an eternal devotion
But you are the sky, what else can be said.
What odd sounds these old trees,
And stones make for me mother
Now that I'm not afraid of the dark.
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Weighted score: 5.286087
Overall Rank: 3764
Posted: March 14, 2005 3:43 PM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2005 3:43 PM PST
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