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Camping, Volume 3 (Free verse) by jessicazee
Death should be quick,
a campfired moth,
disappearing wings,
a notable noise.
Ash light,
flying then dying
toward the canopy
of knowing trees.
Above furtive flames,
the space holes
of meteor showers
live in deep dark.
The stars drip all night long,
blackberry bushes
whisper secret nicknames,
brambles before fruit.
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Posted: March 18, 2005 12:11 AM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2005 12:11 AM PST
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