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23-Feb-05/8:07 AM |
I love to laugh, long and loud and clear
It's getting worse every year
"Longing that this is not a one time event"
I think you do this on purpose, just to see what the critics will say.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Feb-05/8:10 AM |
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i have misplaced my decoder ring.
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| Re: Little Fly by PodPoet |
23-Feb-05/8:17 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Feb-05/8:45 AM |
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a shoe's embrace is kinda funny. and the title is funny too. IN fact, the whole thing is kinda funny.
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
25-Feb-05/6:06 AM |
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The poem: Brilliant. The order is perfect as is the length.
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| Re: Hunger 2 by Dovina |
27-Feb-05/9:24 AM |
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I would vote, but I have no idea what this is. It might be very good, but it is written in a language I do not speak.
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| Re: For Junior by PodPoet |
1-Mar-05/8:14 AM |
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The best poem ever written. -10-
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
1-Mar-05/12:28 PM |
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A mountainous mass of crawling yak shit. You, sir, would not know a gentleman from a training bra. I bid you good day!
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| Re: Amphetamine Witches & Scrabble by Bachus |
2-Mar-05/5:49 PM |
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..."in the paddleboat of our endless love"
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| Re: Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Mar-05/8:56 PM |
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I have never had occasion to read such gut wrenching commments beneath a poeme in my wasted life.
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| Re: March 3,2005/I lost someone by RION12 |
4-Mar-05/11:31 AM |
What a coincidence! I too am listening to some very soft and sad music right this very moment. I seem to have lost my blacket, though. You're gay.
Please, end the buffoonery.
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| Re: Woman on the Stairs by James Rykelangeli |
4-Mar-05/11:32 AM |
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and then he pulled it out and made her smoke it.
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| Re: 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni |
4-Mar-05/11:36 AM |
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I love the way you rhyme mind with mind. It is stench. very nice.
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| Re: A Dozen Roses by jroday |
4-Mar-05/4:10 PM |
The seventh rose holds the caring I give so full and free
I could be wrong, but I think you mean "hose"
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| Re: Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
4-Mar-05/4:15 PM |
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
Brilliant. Should be a "pimple"
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| Re: Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
4-Mar-05/4:16 PM |
at least by the bay.
that's just bloody good writing.
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| Re: We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee |
4-Mar-05/4:18 PM |
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| Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle |
5-Mar-05/8:36 AM |
Well, if nothing else, at least this puddle of poorly executed drivel has sparked another masterpiece from
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.
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| Re: Fastso by Dovina |
5-Mar-05/8:42 AM |
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Well, it may have gone on a bit, but the first stanza made me guffaw with a recklessness I had not known since middle school. I think I will give you a real vote on this one, as it is a nice change-up from that programming hunger bullshit. You have earned it with what I percieve to be genuine repentance. Forgiveness is yours my child.
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| Re: Fastso by Dovina |
5-Mar-05/8:44 AM |
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ahhh.. those were the good old days when I could lie back on the sofa of an afternoon and slag away, unimpeded by the demanding task of critiquing poemes.
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