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Pain (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR I always feel pain
It flows through my vain
I hate it
It kills me
I feel like I've been bit
I wanna flee
Just away from pain
It drives me insane
I ask God
To take it away
But it feels odd
At least by the bay
I want to be at the lake
But my head aches
So much that it's pain
I guess I need it
As much as I can give
Up the ladder:
Deja-Vu
Down the ladder:
grampa told us stories
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Posted: March 3, 2005 7:34 PM PST; Last modified: March 3, 2005 7:34 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9588 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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RION12 @ 64.136.26.226
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3-Mar-05/10:55 PM
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Cool dude. I like it.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
Brilliant. Should be a "pimple"
at least by the bay.
that's just bloody good writing.
Don't take this the wrong way but you sound like you are form the UK not from IL. Sorry if I hurt your feelings but when you say bloody good job it reminds me of people from the UK. The person who wrote this poem Darkmoonlover knows what I mean.
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