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Pain (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR

I always feel pain It flows through my vain I hate it It kills me I feel like I've been bit I wanna flee Just away from pain It drives me insane I ask God To take it away But it feels odd At least by the bay I want to be at the lake But my head aches So much that it's pain I guess I need it As much as I can give

RION12 7-Mar-05/4:42 PM
Don't take this the wrong way but you sound like you are form the UK not from IL. Sorry if I hurt your feelings but when you say bloody good job it reminds me of people from the UK. The person who wrote this poem Darkmoonlover knows what I mean.




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