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bleeding (Free verse) by crooked_smile my lips are cracked
my soul is bleeding
with every heart beat more
invisible blood is spilling
onto the
kitchen
floor
my throat is cracked
my tounge is bleeding
with every word I utter more
invisible blood is spilling
onto the
kitchen
floor
my brain is cracked
my heart is bleeding
with every second more
invisible blood is spilling
onto the
kitchen
floor
Up the ladder:
dreams unheard
Down the ladder:
fleeting thoughts
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Posted: March 9, 2005 4:54 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2005 4:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5918 Comments:
frightful
why thankyou
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(on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0
-lia
lia