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bleeding (Free verse) by crooked_smile

my lips are cracked my soul is bleeding with every heart beat more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor my throat is cracked my tounge is bleeding with every word I utter more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor my brain is cracked my heart is bleeding with every second more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor

crooked_smile 9-Mar-05/6:40 PM
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out

-lia




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