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Memories

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Mar 2005 · 9 comments

Always sad. Never happy. I wish I didn't have memories. Memories of my past. Things I hate. Play in my head. Make me scared Make me hate. They will not escape. I wish I didn't make memories. Even if there good. Every memory has a bad ending for me. It's never all good or all bad. It's both like always. I don't want to go forward in life. I can't go back. So what can I do about these memories I have.

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[n/a] JoyLuck 7-Mar-05/8:17 PM Reply

i wish i could erase my memory of reading this poem.

[10] DaRkMoOnLuVeR 7-Mar-05/8:35 PM Reply

Jebus, this is why I say you are my best friend. . .New one, you should've read me it first, Eli!!! >.< I love it. You know why, too.

[1] Rainbow_chaser 8-Mar-05/9:17 PM Reply

take your memories, learn something from every even good or bad in your life... then it makes everything youve endured worth while, make a negitive memory or even a positive turning point and valuble lesson in life.. and you cant help but be grateful for memories.
workes for me ;)
~Autumn

[4] MacFrantic 8-Mar-05/9:25 PM Reply

What memories?
Peeing in the kiddie pool while everyone was watching?
Or was it the episode of 7th heaven that changed your life?

Grow up and learn to use grammar correctly.

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[n/a] RION12 › MacFrantic 9-Mar-05/7:44 PM Reply

I know I suck spelling and all that other crap but for some reason I just fucken care. That's just me. I really don't care for much.

[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite 10-Mar-05/1:35 PM Reply

seems a too have a touch of fruedian psychology - i like it
-megan

[n/a] zodiac › dancin_n_da_moonlite 11-Mar-05/10:11 PM Reply

No it doesn't.

[1] edpeterson 12-Mar-05/10:02 AM Reply

piles

[1] cheese.doodles 8-Apr-07/8:54 AM Reply

Oh, poor you, whiny baby. Look, this poem is rambly and boring with no metaphor, poor rythm and I think you break the sympathetic contract in your first two lines. Remember to show, don't tell.