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Memories (Free verse) by RION12 Always sad.
Never happy.
I wish I didn't have memories.
Memories of my past.
Things I hate.
Play in my head.
Make me scared
Make me hate.
They will not escape.
I wish I didn't make memories.
Even if there good.
Every memory has a bad ending for me.
It's never all good or all bad.
It's both like always.
I don't want to go forward in life.
I can't go back.
So what can I do about these memories I have.
Up the ladder:
fuck that bitch
Down the ladder:
In Memory of Princess Diana
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Posted: March 7, 2005 7:55 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2005 7:55 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.0 Overall Rank: 13382 Comments:
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JoyLuck @ 65.60.139.26
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7-Mar-05/8:17 PM
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i wish i could erase my memory of reading this poem.
Jebus, this is why I say you are my best friend. . .New one, you should've read me it first, Eli!!! >.< I love it. You know why, too.
take your memories, learn something from every even good or bad in your life... then it makes everything youve endured worth while, make a negitive memory or even a positive turning point and valuble lesson in life.. and you cant help but be grateful for memories.
workes for me ;) ~Autumn
What memories?
Peeing in the kiddie pool while everyone was watching? Or was it the episode of 7th heaven that changed your life? Grow up and learn to use grammar correctly. *4*
I know I suck spelling and all that other crap but for some reason I just fucken care. That's just me. I really don't care for much.
seems a too have a touch of fruedian psychology - i like it
-megan
No it doesn't.
piles
Oh, poor you, whiny baby. Look, this poem is rambly and boring with no metaphor, poor rythm and I think you break the sympathetic contract in your first two lines. Remember to show, don't tell.
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