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fuck that bitch (Free verse) by Lucifer
Aright so this poem isn't about sex... It's about hate and anger Fuck that bastard Aaron We coulda stayed better friends Like hell that's true Every one gets so annoyed by me Like that even matters If I actually cared to Right what I did wrong I'd be humbled on my knees Fuck it I already tried that And it landed my fat ass on the curb I'm done with wanting to kick your ass I know it ain't fucking worth it man(or should I say boy) Dude I got all the same friends you do Stop avoiding me you little shit You have no balls(trust me I tried to play with them) Man stand up to me you little fuck I called you out and still you stood No way man get your ass out If you're gonna hate me... I'm gonna make damn sure well We end it "right" So maybe someday you'll read this Then again I don't care if you don't I tried to be nice and say hi I don't believe in hating Just plain fed up with what you are Tried not to judge Man I tolerated anything I had to Till now you fucking coward Get your ass out here You got good enough reason to my knowledge

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.0
Overall Rank: 13386
Posted: May 12, 2003 5:58 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2003 5:58 PM PDT
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[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-May-03/10:19 PM | Reply
Very lucid and I'm sure rewarding.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 13-May-03/5:27 AM | Reply
Excellent piece!! However, perhaps you should consider the distinction between "poetry" and "a series of uninteresting, mostly unconnected thoughts presented in a form whose only resemblance to poetry is its frequent line breaks". 10/10!!!!
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.91 | 13-May-03/9:14 AM | Reply
Er, quite. Become a rap star maybe? Then you can spout this out and get to wear cool jewellery and stuff. Eek.
[0] asimpleman @ 202.141.239.11 | 14-May-03/2:37 PM | Reply
So u were the bitch and Aaron ur daddy huh?.............hahaha.....don't worry i know u'll get his ass too.....just don't try to write poetry next time

[0] razorgrin @ 198.164.188.34 | 14-May-03/3:10 PM | Reply
It's not a poem, either. here's a hot tip to assist in your 'artistic suffering': Step One, find a belt sander, preferably Black & Decker. Step Two: Apply genitals to said sander. Step Three: turn switch to 'on' position. Now get off the fucking stage, you polyp-picking little twit.
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