on Reaper's Chain by Ladybama9425
22 Apr 2008, 8:43 AM
womanhood in starked nakedness !
on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze
1 Jul 2008, 5:30 PM
good old rhyme 4 something child-like and curried with adult-chill
on Falling Away by Holy Sinner
1 Jul 2008, 5:37 PM
simply break thru the wall and walk away into freedom, only that love can not be found outside of the flesh...and all we are not is not us to blame
on BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm
1 Aug 2005, 6:38 AM
Ilike the simplicity of the read to the lips,
what is poetry, if not the tongue, the lips and the head in unism...
what is poetry, if not the tongue, the lips and the head in unism...
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2005, 6:56 AM
how much this speaks to me, even john K never can tell, only that for me I freely give up on my only me my tears are dripping full blast rain on my fears I losing my love.... This reads me a hope for another try may tomorrow would just erase all my fears, are not poems all in all about magic, the magic of words to make things come through to true
on As the Weary Try to Rest by AnotherNothing
1 Aug 2005, 7:00 AM
I detest the rhymes they puntuate the flow of the rhythm and meaning of this poem , they draw you from meaning to mere sound
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2005, 8:14 AM
at last, even a dying on the cross
can be tiresome,not all the "love" life offers hangs our "hopes" on suicide"
can be tiresome,not all the "love" life offers hangs our "hopes" on suicide"
on Mirrored by MacFrantic
9 Aug 2005, 8:22 AM
poetry in spirit, flesh and word
on Lost (not a poem) by Caducus
5 Oct 2005, 1:19 PM
true to the heart can love so out this world be worthy of a world eating up hearts before you can even earn a meal to live to see tomorrow?
on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil
5 Oct 2005, 1:27 PM
rhyme ; the criminal act of forcing words into feelings, when poetry in the first instance is a feeling feel for meaning that does not come wordless... I cannot agree less.
on the sweet smell of death by pollywolly
11 Jan 2006, 9:58 AM
only that it leaves us out, the death that in the end ends us is and comes from inside us
on for one day only by pollywolly
11 Jan 2006, 10:02 AM
those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?
on Here's your God by Caducus
1 Aug 2006, 10:03 AM
too many people see their God for what it is not...
thanx Caducus for these new revelation.
thanx Caducus for these new revelation.
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2006, 10:00 PM
some good measure of a pain makes out poetry to be good...how love can become the same hate..is the fault that of poetry, when all there is to poetry is poetry, to therefore demand answers from poetry and not life is like Ares muscle up humnaity to safe life only for the animal reign of destruction to in the end be...
a good play of dialectics, though headside down and legside up of Hegels not Marx correction ... gooder than good
a good play of dialectics, though headside down and legside up of Hegels not Marx correction ... gooder than good
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2006, 10:07 PM
you extremely rich full of dialectics ... i want owe your collction in my hand ....be sure i would read everything you post... again how can dialectics the very matter of nature not make any poem good... except...?
on Then things forgotten inside by Prince of Void
19 Dec 2006, 10:10 PM
you don't find them... you don't find a poem...
on Cornerstones by polaroidmemory
19 Dec 2006, 10:30 PM
"I am willing to try", if only all others can in the same spirit uphold...then we can bring Heaven down to Mother earth... abeg thematically tight... who can then care for "cliches" and "metaphors"...
on Chasing Droplets by dinah
2 Aug 2010, 5:46 AM
I can see your pain
to give out life in full richness -
the greatest of all gift and to now be held down
And be bound out of life itself...
what a pity definition of life....
for anyone ... woman or not
to give out life in full richness -
the greatest of all gift and to now be held down
And be bound out of life itself...
what a pity definition of life....
for anyone ... woman or not