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Re: The Time is my enemy by Prince of Void 26-Aug-04/8:46 AM
Time is not our curse, nature transcient cannot be placed @ THE FEET OF TIME , to choose to make an enemy of time is not to understand that without time even our our existence becomes a nullity, a void we cannot reckon with.

In life unend we have in a way subvert the conspiracy of time, even when you mean to say death, this is why "in the ending" a "beginning" can and would be.
Re: Born Of Hope by longships 13-Sep-04/11:01 AM
Much like my dark black country, Nigeria, except that unlike you, I do not see the "children born of hope" here, we are all a long way from "A new beginning"
Re: save by calliope 13-Sep-04/11:09 AM
Unfortunately, the "uncooked" beef is in wait for the fire. The butcher deed is done already.... if only our love can become love beyond the self then maybe freedom can grow to mean something in us for others.
Good poem can only fit in a world transformed free from strive and competition
regarding some deleted poem... 13-Sep-04/11:25 AM
love can only truly be love only when its reason is nothing but love, even God or Jesus for a reason to hinged love on, trepasses on the singular preserve of love.
I like the agitation with which the poem was written , keep close to your feelings and for sure the world would yet see more and even better poems from you.
regarding some deleted poem... 15-Sep-04/12:56 PM
enjoy the "fantasies", to expect more is timed on chance, which we yet are not master. enjoy the poem without the usual complain of heartpains
Re: Solitude by Dovina 15-Sep-04/1:05 PM
"right" about the "recluse", for how can this poem, any poem be birth
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Sep-04/5:44 AM
can love beheld on hold, once savoured, .... I think otherwise. but without a two, what then is love, bless your heart, for a quik rescue.
Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose 21-Sep-04/5:25 AM
The temptation is you or the poem, i a have feeling of happening\s or is it the title that brings the read to such a high....

life is one hell of a bleeding unend, not when for a woman , this is the very sacrifice life demands of her, painful if then love a smokescreen to cool the nerve or fool her away the truth of life is denied and turns a party in the very game of adding to the pains of humanhood, rose never cease the bleed keep the fire for nothing, for poetry to continue the circle of birth to life.
regarding some deleted poem... 21-Sep-04/5:35 AM
at least poetry nevers fails us like every other things at times may so do, friends, love.....
this poem is a testament to that sacred truth.
Re: Little Dreamer by TLRufener 21-Sep-04/5:44 AM
fly baby fly the only way to keep alive is to keep dreaming. like the kiddish simpilicty.
regarding some deleted poem... 24-Sep-04/3:13 AM
if one door no close another one no go open. abeg mek you tek courage , and walk on.
Re: Cleansing Sudan by Mr Pig 24-Sep-04/3:20 AM
black Africa remains the darkest of heart, no thanks to the joint conspiracy of hard shoe leather of "whiteness" imperialism and the black mongols devouring and sending the youngs to live no other lives than the gun
regarding some deleted poem... 24-Sep-04/3:24 AM
how can fall not always come the path of Eve if so easy to words she is moved, to believe oh she believes and to fall she goes
Re: Screws by helenwales 24-Sep-04/5:24 AM
if nuts gets opened, the screw-driving is well done.
only that, after the "dance" .... whose's flesh wears the "plasters" and who pays the bill for the pains.
Re: Green by berdabear 24-Sep-04/5:30 AM
any "green" ripe a pluck,like the above consumated in flesh is worth the "ticklishing" in the mouth.
regarding some deleted poem... 27-Sep-04/11:28 AM
please do deciding, only after love, does life encouters us, not even those who ignore, life also don't even spare them.
Re: Diaries of tears by Prince of Void 27-Sep-04/11:33 AM
dreams like the many ,too many outside the few, dying away with the days, you struck a good score on this to your name , how void is our lives.
Re: Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus 11-Oct-04/6:38 AM
to be found out that your love means nothing, unable to stop the tears from rocking down from her eyes, you deserve this rejection
Re: The Fear of Being and will not be forever by Prince of Void 7-Jan-05/6:29 AM
we are eternally condemned by itself to nothingness, and for this we need not hold our selves in pain and agony over this since before death we all are helpless, but least that death is incapable of taking away from us is LIFE,lets live it in full and in meaning to make the world a better place , indeed to "REBUILDING A NEW WORLD"for the whole of humanity , this for me is my poem....
Re: You, the Line, and I by MacFrantic 1-Aug-05/6:28 AM
how we go from resolution made to more resolute and cannot turn back,... learn those who can make it work they should not foul their chance for coming back after the line is drawn may only earn another hard- put line... love this....


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