Re: To Lesley by Bahookie	11-Mar-03/8:35 AM
Too many selfs and not enough of anything else.
Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik	11-Mar-03/8:23 AM
Odd images all around and interesting use of grammar in places, but that in no matter to the daring and original, those who now must fill the cancer-ridden shoes of Stan Rice.
Re: Three Pennies of Garbage by babyBOOMER	10-Mar-03/11:10 PM
I refuse to vote on any of your poems until you tell me what Z looks like naked playing the fiddle. Write a poem about that!
Re: The System by LeBlank II	10-Mar-03/11:08 PM
Great use of cheese ball rhyme. This is like a techno pimple poem! Why are you lablank ! !! and !!!? Did you really think we need to read all of these fantastic poems at once and could not wait a week for more? Oh baby, give me more. I want Leblank IV.
Re: PC by NewbieMe	10-Mar-03/11:03 PM
Really, are you serious or just a misguided four-year-old who has access to mommy's computer for 15 minutes a day?
Re: Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Mar-03/11:00 PM
Oh lynn, give me that fucking blankey before I go nuts on you. I am super tough you know. hahahahahah.
Re: a comment on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Mar-03/10:59 PM
hahahahahahaha. A 4. This is sap. I.e. pooh. Send it to a legit pub and let them laugh at you!! Ooooooh. I am so close to this poem and you suck lost in America. hahahahahahahaha. what a doof.
Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Mar-03/10:55 PM
Another in the long line of "I am misunderstood, really this is genius" crap you write. Dude, Stan Rice is dead. It is yours for the taking!!!!!!!!
Re: Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT	10-Mar-03/10:52 PM
Some good, some bad. Think about the metaphor you are trying to create and the expound on it. It is not as if it is an easy thing to do. If you want to be a good writer, you have to pour over your work.to make sure everything is connected. Make sure it all makes sense. Just ask DA.
Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub	10-Mar-03/10:39 PM
Big words, decent flow, fine images, but the poem feels a bit forced. Like a generic observation. But, I am drunk so don't mind me.
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/10:31 PM
A poor attempt at imitating Dark Angel while still sounding like the goof of a poet cadacus! Crap all around!
Re: Stand in line for nothingness by Crakyamuni	10-Mar-03/10:28 PM
You really do not have a clue as to what you are trying to say, do you?
Re: A God Upon This Earth by WHeYe	10-Mar-03/10:23 PM
The first line ruined everything!
Re: The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw	10-Mar-03/10:22 PM
Seas of blood is goofy. The incessant repetition is goofy. The reference to Bob Marley is goofy. Why are you leblank #3. That is goofy!
Re: Sure-it-fits! {haiku*series} by <{Baba^Yaga}>	10-Mar-03/10:16 PM
I see after a month and a half you still write like shit! Such originality in writing that way though! Good job, dickhead!
Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/10:11 PM
Profound!! Genius!! Sure it is. Look up the haiku!!
Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/12:01 AM
Have you seen Z. She did not go to that Great White concert did she? she is a metal chic, you know. Where was it. The news here is piss poor.
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	22-Feb-03/11:59 PM
Are not we all dying of a broken heart?
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	2-Feb-03/10:01 PM
Oh my god! How could I have ever of doubted you! This is superb. Genius. As horus8 says: Brave. Just brave. I am humbled here on a Sunday night watching snow fall outside my window. Grim one and Grim two would dare call this: provocative, cunning, heart felt. You will go far in your writing career. I now have no doubt. Congratulations, Mr Ranger. You win!!!
Re: Love spank by Shardik	2-Feb-03/9:51 PM
Provocative! Sexy! Intrepid!