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Stand in line for nothingness (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Sometimes worlds are born in a pure instant of the drop of a shield
those words we wield in pain make sane what never became or could ever
become
for some there can only be the love of life through the 90 degree
reverie
Learning how to be comfort through reckless banter lit with divinity
that can only exist in this you and me
sadly I see the shallow mess that has dictated these words and guess
you might never have even considered this
I find it limitless like an ocean of sadness driven to joy through
madness only you and I could visually bear
we have the same molecular structures in the dust of our hair-
It's beauty like yours that can let minds soar
it is beauty like yours that will lead into the air
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Posted: March 10, 2003 4:01 PM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 4:01 PM PST
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