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Free verse № 43343

Stand in line for nothingness

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

Sometimes worlds are born in a pure instant of the drop of a shield those words we wield in pain make sane what never became or could ever become for some there can only be the love of life through the 90 degree reverie Learning how to be comfort through reckless banter lit with divinity that can only exist in this you and me sadly I see the shallow mess that has dictated these words and guess you might never have even considered this I find it limitless like an ocean of sadness driven to joy through madness only you and I could visually bear we have the same molecular structures in the dust of our hair- It's beauty like yours that can let minds soar it is beauty like yours that will lead into the air

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[5] wLeBlancw 10-Mar-03/4:06 PM Reply
Break it up and shorten it. That would give it more of a punch.
[0] poetandknowit 10-Mar-03/10:28 PM Reply
You really do not have a clue as to what you are trying to say, do you?
[n/a] Crakyamuni › poetandknowit 11-Mar-03/3:30 PM Reply

I don't have a clue as to what you might believe I don't know, but is that my fault, or simply the thing that divides you from I from what you might find to be a validation of your own mental masturbation and do not forget your post posted menstruation
did I mention my Amani is Malaysian?