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Sure-it-fits! {haiku*series} (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Obelisk squatter! You packed your shit so well. You amazed yourself. Pentagon soldier. Wants a job transfer real bad. Can't fit under desk. Lincoln's unfit ghost. Was seen roaming the white house. Will work for food sign. Tom cruise is not gay! Scientology cures all. Risky business.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.1827645
Overall Rank: 4739
Posted: August 25, 2002 10:05 AM PDT; Last modified: March 9, 2003 11:48 AM PST
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Comments:
[9] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.178 | 25-Aug-02/12:57 PM | Reply
quality.
[7] ==Doylum @ 213.122.117.179 | 25-Aug-02/5:18 PM | Reply
bottom haikus by a kiddy fiddler, God bless america. shit forgot the capital W no America.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.100.176.184 | 10-Mar-03/10:16 PM | Reply
I see after a month and a half you still write like shit! Such originality in writing that way though! Good job, dickhead!
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