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Three Pennies of Garbage (Free verse) by babyBOOMER
November 5, 1999 ~ Three Pennies of Garbage ~ To Those Who Have Read My Words Often I Am Called a Poet But That Is Truly Not So Garbage Junk Clutter and Shit ~ True I May Have Journeyed Long and Far I May Have Witnessed More than I Care to Have All Inconveniences You See Sort of like Inadequate Plumbing ~ I Bare My Soul Show No Privatization Write of Loneliness and Burden To Me an Intense and Concentrated Effort ~ Sometimes Also Worthless Words Written with Obscenities Be it of Language or Visions Which My Eyes Still Hold ~ I've Been Called Madman Murderer Killer If Children And Collaborator of Death ~ Most Which I Am Sure Describe Me Somewhat ~ I Live in a Land of Memories Sleep in Purple Sails With Clouds of Smoke And Dream of Occasional Remnants ~ I Am Fortunate Though Being Surrounded by Love My Illusions Are Beautiful Certainly Worthy of Any Mans Heart ~ But Here I Go Again! Strong Side-weak Side Tenderly and Truly I Write Sitting on My Backside ~ Here Again Is Three Pennies Worth of Garbage. ~~~~ Thom

Up the ladder: need of love
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Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12491
Posted: March 9, 2003 6:38 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2003 6:38 PM PST
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[5] lastobelus @ 217.226.25.123 | 10-Mar-03/3:33 PM | Reply
Why is every word capitalized? Is this a kind of anti-cummings curmudgeonry?
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.100.176.184 | 10-Mar-03/11:10 PM | Reply
I refuse to vote on any of your poems until you tell me what Z looks like naked playing the fiddle. Write a poem about that!
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > poetandknowit | 11-Mar-03/7:37 AM | Reply
tsk! don't write when drunk! how many times do you admonish me with this one? besides you gave kevin away to that adulteress--so you deserve what you get! HA!
[n/a] babyBOOMER @ 205.188.208.42 > poetandknowit | 11-Mar-03/6:56 PM | Reply
Well, I ain't seen her playin' the fiddle yet. Does that help?
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