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need of love (Free verse) by bxjay170
some say love is pain but cant see what they gain a person without love is like a picture with no frame theres nothing beter than when you find someone you love and they love you back the same for her i will give up my crown give up my fortune and fame theres no one like you and for your love theres nothin i wont do

Up the ladder: WE
Down the ladder: Three Pennies of Garbage

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12490
Posted: March 5, 2003 7:59 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 7:59 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 5-Mar-03/9:49 PM | Reply
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer!

Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
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