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A God Upon This Earth (Free verse) by WHeYe
(read it in its entirety before judging, please)
Where Heaven be a Monarchy
Indeed I find this odd
As if upon this cursed Earth
A king should be a God
And follow mindless zombies
To his whimsical desires
Or suffer fate of horrid death
Consumed by singeing fires
Frightened little people
Do not dare to King should tell
Unless he change his blessed ways
Prepare for their rebel
Yet clan begins and clan expands
Until the clan is strong
And clan collects against the King
Of whom has done them wrong
The perfect king is perfect does
Though no one can agree
What perfect is is no one else
So how could it be he?
Break free from solitary King
For making you his slaves
Expecting follow questionless
By claiming you he saves
Perfect the land to fit the minds
Of those with stronger sword
And make a motto that reflects
Our oneness with the Lord
For sure this be correct
Oppose the thoughts of just one man
That several make the rules
In which the government is ran
All have a say in who is King
If not they can rebel
To them, you see, comparatively,
The other place is Hell
What fools to live under
A reign controlled by only one
Where power?s given easily
Because you?re born his son
God bless ourselves for surely
God prefers our blessed race
And smote upon the lesser ones
With slightly darker face
Our country is a copy
Of what Heaven surely be
But read again and question
Why God heads a Monarchy
So choose the one important
To your everlasting pride
Religion and democracy
Have yet to coincide
No correlation ?tween the two
Does make it interesting
That stubbornly we still insist
The US has God?s blessing.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11760
Posted: March 10, 2003 4:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 4:08 PM PST
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