Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus	12-Nov-02/6:12 PM
Your morality segment ruins everything, but then maybe I do not have the insight to understand this sort of hard-hitting hipster thing.
Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170	12-Nov-02/6:02 PM
Please, use line breaks! And this sounds a bit too much like a greeting card.
Re: An ode to my sugar daddy, but in haiku by horus8	12-Nov-02/5:49 PM
What if the tractor is a brand new John Deere? It just doesn't work. But Aspen just was pounded with a couple of feet of snow and opens next week. Early for the first time in years!
Re: There is no end by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-02/2:23 PM
Big bad universal themes written in big bad universal language just doesn't seem hunky dory. Do you read poems over the CB to all the other truckers? And after you are finished do you say 10-4?
Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit	12-Nov-02/1:58 PM
I was not bothering you. You merely asked for suggestions regarding the perversion poems and I offered a couple as goofy as the ones you had already posted. You made an initial comment about my mother regarding a poem, simple as that. Everything past that point has been a response to that. Previous comments have been in regards to your asinine comments regarding things you obviously no little about: world affairs. And you spew angry sentiments without logic. Yes, I think most people, whether they know someone or not, can feel for the loss of life that is taken in such tragic proportion in any situation. I am sorry you lack the ability to comprehend this, and that you would rather stoop to name calling and wishing that I had a life, etc. etc., when really that has little to do with any of the argument. In your educational development, are you learning anything, Have you traveled at all? Or do you just get you kicks at the local McDonald's? A place that if you had any sensible knowledge or ethics, you would choose not to frequent.
Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit	12-Nov-02/12:50 PM
Wow, now you have stooped to the level of deleting comments. You were asking for suggestions for the sequel to your comic ditty or attempt at a joke or whatever you might call this shit you write and I complied, and now you once again make off the cuff attacks. Look you ignorant fool, if you cannot say anything about the work at hand, which you cannot, why must you make yourself out to be a heartless idiot. You have not only proved that with your insulting and childlike comments but also with your infantile attempts at clever poems. My mother was not a bitch. She was quite a splendid woman. You will most likely never accomplish half of what she did in her short live because you carry a chip on your shoulder the size of Miami and probably spend way too much time watching bad movies and wallowing in self pity and angst. Your previous comment was ridiculous and your attempt at an apology was ridiculous, just as you are ridiculous. I have been nothing but civil in our debates, merely commenting on you rudeness and continually insulting comments based on nothing but ignorance (refer to all the comments made about the loss of innocent life). Just because you have a tough lot or are an angry young woman who simply needs to see a bit of the world before they open there mouth, does not give you the excuse to be a pathetic human.
Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya	7-Nov-02/1:05 PM
Thanks. I just wanted to know how you reasoned it.
Re: ... by logun2002ya	7-Nov-02/12:40 PM
Eye am just curious why the ellipsoidal head each and every one of your poems. Is it a stylistic choice? Is it part of your overwhelming desire to set yourself apart from the maddening crowd? Are you the sort that dresses the part of the artistic to make yourself stand out becasue your talent cannot do it? Eye am just curious to you creative process? any assistance here would be greatly appreciated to understand how I should approach this work.
Re: a comment on Some Things by Christof	7-Nov-02/9:12 AM
You will always be the bald headed birdman to me.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	6-Nov-02/10:41 PM
But I love the title!
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	6-Nov-02/10:41 PM
Not a favorite. But you were pissed, so fair enough.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	6-Nov-02/10:39 PM
Doesn't the fog offer protection? Oh, yes they are moving, or is it they? Maybe "I"? Hmmmm. Hey, what is a cyber back seat, you know, just in case I get lucky? Why "temp'rature"? Make sure to make sure it's not the stick shift!
Re: Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom	6-Nov-02/12:04 PM
The GOP rules, Doug!! Conform or die. Finally, we are going to take over Canada, except for Alberta, they jumped ship ages ago. Did you hear that Limondae, Razorgrin, Tint? I am giving you full warning because I care for your safety. We are lining tanks up as we speak, the predators are searching for targets we haven't already taken over with NAFTA. Baby Bush is having the name god changed to George in the bible. All new texts are due at the end of the month. But, first it is onwards to Canada. Doug, I think it time you come over to the right and see the error of your ways.
Re: The Washing by strider1	4-Nov-02/9:35 PM
"Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery." Eh. Did you get a boner letting my words flow around in your head and blood and while your fingers typed them out onto the screen. I bet you did, boy, I bet you did.
Re: Youth Fair by daniella	4-Nov-02/9:27 PM
"When the sticky pink cotton dress Gets stuck between your thighs" -- Excellent visual and rhythmic line, but the last two lines do not match it and the poem loses me a bit. After you nail something like that, a major league line, I expect the whole poem to follow. But a nice draft all the same.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/11:26 AM
Christof? Hey Christof? What the fuck is happening over there in England. Has that lovely sense of irony spilled down one of those 10-gallon release toilets? There is a German that lives in Earl's Court, a mere block of the metro, down from the putrid Burger King. I forget the name of the street. He is a clever sort and obviously has stolen all you abilities of humor (yes, a German--that is how bad the situation has become). Please, see him. Save your country.
Re: a comment on Got Balls? by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/11:22 AM
You would like this. Does it have that edge that fits in with the spoken word crowd? Your racist rants have more style. Of course, that is not saying much.
Re: untitled by bluwiz	4-Nov-02/10:42 AM
I guess you are on the right track as far a creating an image. Unfortunately, your age is showing here. But at least it is not a whiny pimple poem.
Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/10:40 AM
Pointless. You obviously spend an excessive amount of time parked in front of the television watching reruns of pop idol. It shows in your thinking. Don't you have a new video game to buy and play with your worthless little friends that have saturated the site with their mindless boggle the past couple of weeks?
Re: ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney	4-Nov-02/7:52 AM
Why direct voice? This is under 25 words and you use "wet" twice. Maybe you should pick another. Other than that, you might be on to something.