Re: a comment on Loosed by <~>	18-Oct-02/9:12 AM
In the beginning of the play Romeo is scolded about his being love sick over another, I forget her name, R something, and then so quickly becoming love sick over Juliet. Can you use that? You'd have to put yourself in Romeo's place.
Re: purple and black gangstaz theme tune by rosiebailey	18-Oct-02/9:07 AM
I love " fastest rapper..." This poem reminds of Langston Hughes. I haven't read him in a while, i should do that. Very good.
Re: a comment on Loosed by <~>	18-Oct-02/9:02 AM
Yuo could talk abotu his failings, or the trap he has no power to escape.
Re: Loosed by <~>	18-Oct-02/8:57 AM
What did you change?
Re: the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY	18-Oct-02/8:47 AM
Some of this is brilliant. Soemof this makes me squirm. I'll have to get use to it and come back to it later.
Re: Loosed by <~>	18-Oct-02/8:42 AM
"...bare these sinews" is the only thing that hangs me up here. S3 is gorgeous. Stop running in incestual circles. See some other band. I went to Bob Dylan last night and 2 brothers tried to pick up on me.
Re: The Devil Made Her Do It by Limness	17-Oct-02/9:00 AM
It's good but I can see why you want to fix it up a bit. I'll print this and stare at it a while. There's nothing obvious.
Re: On the Swings by Christof	17-Oct-02/8:43 AM
Playful.
Re: a comment on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT	17-Oct-02/8:14 AM
Burn that book. She's a terrible poet.
Re: a comment on On a chill morning by razorgrin	17-Oct-02/7:54 AM
It not's disjointed to me. Drive is perfect. The word puts her in a car, with foggy glass between her and stranger. I had no trouble with it. He's watching her roll out the drive, inexpressive look on his face, arms hanging down at his sides.
Re: flight by soccer23	16-Oct-02/8:00 PM
Sweet Jesus, this is bizarre and bad.
Re: a comment on The Way It Is by Tascobar	16-Oct-02/5:30 PM
I have capture the Spawn of Bachus. I am taking him to the Castle of Carl the Republican. I will feed him Famous Stars til he poops his Batmans. Caio for now.
Re: Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	16-Oct-02/5:15 PM
Epic! Spectacular! Technicolor madness. Don't let Schpeilberg get his hands on it. He'll turn it into heart-warmer, the dirty little heeb!
Re: a comment on ending by Limness	16-Oct-02/5:05 PM
I have read all your previous comments. You are the great offender, I mean defender, I mean trans-gender. E-mail sender. Drunken bender. Bike tire mender. Just kiddin' with ya hunny-buns. You are a tad anal when it comes to h'ay cooze. Domo aregato. Unstick the toddler.
Re: remnants by crin	16-Oct-02/2:31 PM
The sutures are unravelling that hold this thing together.
Re: ending by Limness	16-Oct-02/2:18 PM
I hate you because you're beautiful. P& K will be by later to tell you this is not a High-Coup, Hi-Coo. Hey Cool poem. You are totally bitchin'.
Re: The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie by <{Baba^Yaga}>	16-Oct-02/2:13 PM
7,000 dollars! 7,000 dollars! ( Hot Tamales are aero-dynamic) I'm glad I went to bed early that night.
Re: Choices by Ojiboch	16-Oct-02/2:08 PM
Ask the flight attendant to bring you a blanket, and some hot cocoa. your Po-M is poopilicious.
Re: a comment on On a chill morning by razorgrin	16-Oct-02/2:03 PM
Gaping hole? Please point it out least i fall in. Looks fine to me. She could be driving anything; bike, scooter, a broom. What's the problem?
Re: Devotion by Tyriana	16-Oct-02/1:57 PM
Hey what happened? I left you a comment @ 45 min. ago.