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Free verse № 20597

Choices

by Ojiboch

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

It is in this place I quiver with rage I shiver the night away And when dawn breaks, I am gone That's how I travel until I'm done If I think of a better way, that path I might take That path I may cross today Let's hope

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5 comments

[8] Nicholas Jones 16-Oct-02/6:44 AM Reply
Nice. The business about paths makes me think of Robert Frost - the road not taken.
[1] Tintagiles 16-Oct-02/6:47 AM Reply
Ouch. My brain is hurting.
[n/a] Tyriana 16-Oct-02/6:49 AM Reply
I agree with the frost thing. I hate Robert Frost.
[0] Bachus 16-Oct-02/1:35 PM Reply
my left eyeball just imploded. thanks.
[0] god'swife 16-Oct-02/2:08 PM Reply
Ask the flight attendant to bring you a blanket, and some hot cocoa. your Po-M is poopilicious.