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How Could You Leave (Free verse) by GTK
How could you leave me standing here? Alone in my sorrow and pain, leaving me, with nothing, left to gain. How could you leave me standing here? My body drenched in crimson tide, now all lost I fell I should've never tried. How could you leave me standing here? Trapped within the storm of lost, my want to live was the gravest cost. How could you leave me standing here? Carried away by your mister, I tried to yell, but to no avail, for itcame out only as a silent whisper.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.462117
Overall Rank: 12868
Posted: November 14, 2002 11:17 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2002 11:17 AM PST
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/2:12 PM | Reply
ha! ha! what a ringer...s
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