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Free verse № 20726

The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie

by <{Baba^Yaga}>

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Oct 2002 · Edited 8 Jul 2003 · 5 comments

But now he blows bubbles With a cocker Spaniel named Pepsi In the hollow log of denial Since they both came down with Hep C

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[9] god'swife 16-Oct-02/2:13 PM Reply
7,000 dollars! 7,000 dollars! ( Hot Tamales are aero-dynamic) I'm glad I went to bed early that night.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › god'swife 8-Jul-03/10:37 PM Reply
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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Bill Z Bub 8-Jul-03/10:51 PM Reply
Yes, I know, it's all very exciting, I was sitting down and all of a sudden... It came to me! Hepititis C and pepsi. WOW! I thought, that hasn't been done, but now, I've done it! DON'T YOU SEE!!!! I'VE RHYMED A SOFTDRINK WITH A HORRIBLE ILLNESS! I'm a poetic hero! I'm a fucking CRUSADER <horus starts singing lo da to vee lo dat toe lo da do ve do ta!> I win something, I know it, I don't know what, but I believe I've won something.
[8] A. Nomaly 30-Nov-02/4:29 PM Reply
Im a sucker for mean sewers. Did you
kow they make green Chai now? (you said you needed some new friends, o Im sorry assets
[8] Quarton 3-Dec-02/3:30 PM Reply
I was tired when I first read your poem. I just finished reading it again and it definitely held my interest. Sorry for the negative comment. It is well written and obviously a strong statement, one that most of us would not have the balls to write. Peace:)