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The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}> But now he blows bubbles
With a cocker Spaniel named Pepsi
In the hollow log of denial
Since they both came down with Hep C
Up the ladder:
Aids in a van - are you local?
Down the ladder:
Confused
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: October 16, 2002 1:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2003 5:26 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5521 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.135.134
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16-Oct-02/2:13 PM
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7,000 dollars! 7,000 dollars! ( Hot Tamales are aero-dynamic) I'm glad I went to bed early that night.
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Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.9
> god'swife
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8-Jul-03/10:37 PM
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
> Bill Z Bub
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8-Jul-03/10:51 PM
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Yes, I know, it's all very exciting, I was sitting down and all of a sudden... It came to me! Hepititis C and pepsi. WOW! I thought, that hasn't been done, but now, I've done it! DON'T YOU SEE!!!! I'VE RHYMED A SOFTDRINK WITH A HORRIBLE ILLNESS! I'm a poetic hero! I'm a fucking CRUSADER <horus starts singing lo da to vee lo dat toe lo da do ve do ta!> I win something, I know it, I don't know what, but I believe I've won something.
Im a sucker for mean sewers. Did you
kow they make green Chai now? (you said you needed some new friends, o Im sorry assets
I was tired when I first read your poem. I just finished reading it again and it definitely held my interest. Sorry for the negative comment. It is well written and obviously a strong statement, one that most of us would not have the balls to write. Peace:)
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