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Confused (Free verse) by debased lost, lost in time, lost in space
spinning, spinning so fast, i'm falling off the track
falling, falling so far and hard
i will be pernamently scared.
scared, scared so deep
that the blood no longer flows here
the blood no longer flows
Up the ladder:
The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie
Down the ladder:
listen
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Posted: October 26, 2002 6:04 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2002 6:04 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5521 Comments:
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rockinindividual @ 68.85.69.50
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1-Jan-03/1:13 PM
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i like the repetition, would be awesome to hear somebody read this...8
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