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Confused (Free verse) by debased

lost, lost in time, lost in space spinning, spinning so fast, i'm falling off the track falling, falling so far and hard i will be pernamently scared. scared, scared so deep that the blood no longer flows here the blood no longer flows

rockinindividual 1-Jan-03/1:13 PM
i like the repetition, would be awesome to hear somebody read this...8




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