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listen (Free verse) by daniella
the moaning stopped long enough
to understand the man was dead.
see the child was freed of the womb.
feel the wound will heal.
wake up the hungry ones for food will come.
if you crawl through the space low enough
you'll find the light has dimmed.
the floor will soon cave in.
air is thicker down below.
now take off your hat and sit right down
and strip naked just for me.
for the day is getting older
and lampslight makes our spirit shudder
just to think, its not our time.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5523
Posted: November 16, 2002 9:05 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2002 9:05 PM PST
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