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The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

But now he blows bubbles With a cocker Spaniel named Pepsi In the hollow log of denial Since they both came down with Hep C

Quarton 3-Dec-02/3:30 PM
I was tired when I first read your poem. I just finished reading it again and it definitely held my interest. Sorry for the negative comment. It is well written and obviously a strong statement, one that most of us would not have the balls to write. Peace:)




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