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like love in the movies (Lyric) by crin
you were a star like a starlet you took my breath away just like they do on the screen you were perfection you came from out of nowhere now i fear that i've lost you forever you were the damsel in distress and i thought i was destined to be your prince i thought we would live happily ever after i thought this was the final chapter but then you turned the page and now it seems i've been written out of the script like my spotlight is about to fade and if this is anything like love in the movies i can only hope this is the part where the couple splits apart only to come back together in time for a happy ending and if this is anything like love in the movies i hope we can hit rewind and start all over again

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3
Weighted score: 4.65
Overall Rank: 12297
Posted: October 15, 2002 6:45 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2002 6:45 PM PDT
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[2] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.92 | 16-Oct-02/6:47 AM | Reply
I'll hope the music to this is good. It might just save it.
[3] god'swife @ 209.178.176.99 | 16-Oct-02/8:16 AM | Reply
The title is fantastic. I think I'll steal it. the poem itself I'm disappointed to say is cliche and predictable.
[0] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.139 | 16-Oct-02/10:05 AM | Reply
Good title for rubbish. How dare you draw me in and then present this. I am offended. Are you in advertising?
[8] diamondeyez @ 152.163.188.72 | 27-Nov-02/11:38 PM | Reply
i like this poem...many can relate to it...including me and you can gt a million different interpretations from it
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