| Re: Thank You by pnaipoet |
9-Jan-04/7:04 PM |
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Holy shit! this is awsome, keep writing like this and you'll be famous some day
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| Re: FAILED PRAYER by MEMORIES |
9-Jan-04/7:05 PM |
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you have the 3 d's i like in poetry, deep, dark, and depressing, *applause*
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| Re: Happy Birthday by psychedelic |
9-Jan-04/7:18 PM |
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not gonna say anything, im just gonna give you a 9
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| Re: Zooidal Veldt by Wulf |
9-Jan-04/7:19 PM |
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An awsome read from beginning to end, i woulden't change anything
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| Re: Waiting to live by singinkygal |
9-Jan-04/8:02 PM |
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I like how you make death and life seem the same
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| Re: Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:04 PM |
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whoever gave a 1 shoulden't be reading poetry
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| Re: My Castle by Cougarchic |
9-Jan-04/8:07 PM |
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god, i LOVE poems like this, thanx cougarchic
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| Re: The Blood by Blindpoetry |
9-Jan-04/8:08 PM |
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it's good, but it gets a little repeatitive
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| Re: Tragic Love by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:10 PM |
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tragic love is the only kind of love left in this world, sad but true, but i really liked this poem :)
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| Re: Malaysia by Crakyamuni |
10-Jan-04/6:08 PM |
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that made little-to-no sense to my eyes, great
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| Re: it's slow time by silvertongueddevil |
10-Jan-04/6:14 PM |
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| Re: Erosion by shwenatjadeflower |
10-Jan-04/6:15 PM |
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| Re: To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine |
11-Jan-04/6:36 PM |
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This is very strong poetry which not many people are capable of
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| Re: Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
11-Jan-04/6:38 PM |
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fucked up, like poems should be, this is a little too off for me
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| Re: Mermaid by lastobelus |
11-Jan-04/6:49 PM |
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it's awsome writing, but a little long-winded
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| Re: The critic by juxtaposition |
11-Jan-04/7:44 PM |
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whatever floats your goat dude
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| Re: iron coil by Shit-Crumpets |
3-Feb-05/5:57 AM |
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I don't think you meant for this to be a great poem, but I'm under the impression it means something speical to you
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| Re: love shall set you free by stacylynn_3 |
21-Oct-05/5:48 AM |
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| Re: plants grow from caskets by skaskowski |
21-Oct-05/5:51 AM |
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Why would god make you "brown and bloody, bone exposed", and is there a reason it's only your foot, or does god just hate your foot?
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| Re: God's Angels by _iamtwilight_ |
21-Oct-05/5:54 AM |
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Mother is the name for God on the lips and hearts of all children. Your daughter is out there on the streets waiting for you.
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