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God's Angels (Free verse) by _iamtwilight_
God's Angels have flight God's Angels have song God's Angels are quick to warn us when we have done wrong. We don't see it coming We think we can hide But God's Angels can see us through all tests of time. They're gracious & forgiving But don't push their limits, For much later than soon You wont know what hit you, God's Angels will show you how karma can get you. Fate comes back around threefold That's what I've always been told Upsetting God's Angels Will force them to scold You will learn of their rapture And punishment will be unparallel to the greatest of sorrows Buried deep within your hearts hollows. But God's Angels use powers much greater than that. They listen & learn from the souls that burn with power and love, inside kind minds and warm hearts. They react just as forceful when good deeds play their part. They desire to reward much more than to harm. They'll whisper to the fates Touching stories of your lack of hate. Live your life unselfishly, You won't be forgotton When it's time for God's Angels to pass their judgment On who has been worthy & who has been rotten.

Up the ladder: BLOBBY
Down the ladder: afraid

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11144
Posted: February 20, 2004 10:15 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2004 10:15 PM PST
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[8] devina @ 195.5.74.5 | 21-Feb-04/4:03 AM | Reply
Good... I like it!
[2] little_big_nose @ 163.153.198.87 | 21-Oct-05/5:54 AM | Reply
Mother is the name for God on the lips and hearts of all children. Your daughter is out there on the streets waiting for you.
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