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Erosion (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower
My love is like a rock
Strong and sturdy.
But as time passes by
Erosion takes its toll.
Chipping and chisseling,
My love will soon fade
Into darkness,
Like evening to night.
But don't worry
Your lovely head,
Before it fades
We will be dead.
Then time won't
Effect us, as we
Spend eternity together,
Just out of reach of
Erosion.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11701
Posted: July 11, 2002 10:53 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 10:53 PM PDT
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