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Erosion (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

My love is like a rock Strong and sturdy. But as time passes by Erosion takes its toll. Chipping and chisseling, My love will soon fade Into darkness, Like evening to night. But don't worry Your lovely head, Before it fades We will be dead. Then time won't Effect us, as we Spend eternity together, Just out of reach of Erosion.

Montinequego 21-Jul-02/6:05 AM
Hey you. As you already know. This is Jeramey. i believe that this poem is one of the besk. Dont look towards others to judge your poetry. it is what you felt at the time. Its excellent anyway




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