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love shall set you free (Lyric) by stacylynn_3
I am surrounded by walls, no one can hear my desperate calls. I scream with all my might, but it remains silent in the lonely night my eyes begin to tear, but still no one can hear. I am trapped, left without any hope, so i sit, and begin to mope. My aggravation leaves welts, the depression never melts. This is were i remain, suffering in so much pain. The only way to get out, is if he comes about. Only he can release me. because love shall set you free.

Up the ladder: Wither Away
Down the ladder: My Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10848
Posted: March 25, 2003 5:43 PM PST; Last modified: March 25, 2003 5:43 PM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 195.92.194.18 | 26-Mar-03/12:59 AM | Reply
love is a turkish prison.

however the romantic side of me can dig this, but you got the devil beating the shit out of my angel in this shoulders war i'm having 7
[3] little_big_nose @ 163.153.198.87 | 21-Oct-05/5:48 AM | Reply
someone needs a hug!!!!!
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