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My Life (Free verse) by poetofthestar
Scared Sensless Can't you see? I'm drowning in this misery Falling Further Black and Red How can I live? When so many are dead Beaten Bloody Broken and Bruised My body's in tact but my soul's abused Painless Pleasure I can't feel Why is everything so sureal? Can I survive being alive?

Up the ladder: love shall set you free
Down the ladder: Waiting

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10843
Posted: April 5, 2003 10:18 AM PST; Last modified: April 5, 2003 10:18 AM PST
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