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My Life

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Apr 2003 · 0 comments

Scared Sensless Can't you see? I'm drowning in this misery Falling Further Black and Red How can I live? When so many are dead Beaten Bloody Broken and Bruised My body's in tact but my soul's abused Painless Pleasure I can't feel Why is everything so sureal? Can I survive being alive?

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