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iron coil (Free verse) by Shit-Crumpets
now dead, or so
you said, its ok
my nemesis.
choked me silly
-the sound of gasps
made you smile.
Iron coil
burn and boil
put me under the soil
and suck off the last drop of oil
You will celebrate this day
its tradition, and another way to gloat.
make a profit, a liar with a dental plan
and blank fingerprints
tell the grandkiddies all about
sucking me dry, and taking them to college
after repeating my last words
Iron coil
burn and boil
put me under the soil
and suck off the last drop of oil
what a shitty bedtime story
give them nightmares ole buddy.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4921
Posted: November 18, 2003 5:44 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 5:44 PM PST
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Very much liked.
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just needed to post something.