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The Blood (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Running, Running away from my head I'm to stupid to even know what I've read Once I saw that paper, I bled I wiped the blood all over these words I can write, but it seems I cannot read what I've written The paper is what bitten me The blood seeps out now ; singing words now that it is free "Havoc is what I will cause for this man, Anger is what I will produce for this big fan." Is what he says Anger is its emotion That is my blood type ; It is smoother than lotion but sways in a a thick motion The amount of blood is growing I am swimming in a puddle of blood that is flowing Please don't touch the blood or you will be in trouble And my blood will double and then you will bleed also - making you turn into rubble Now give me a bucket and I will shovel the blood out So I will not be in the mood to pout So help me, help me, its seems like this will never clot This is way to abnormal! Am I scheduled to rot?

Up the ladder: Betwixt and In Between
Down the ladder: what part

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Weighted score: 4.7758822
Overall Rank: 11359
Posted: January 9, 2004 6:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 6:21 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] little_big_nose @ 209.23.41.94 | 9-Jan-04/8:08 PM | Reply
it's good, but it gets a little repeatitive
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > little_big_nose | 9-Jan-04/8:18 PM | Reply
ah yes... something I have a bit to much of in all my poetry... Repeatativness...
[2] titan69 @ 62.31.23.84 | 10-Jan-04/12:44 AM | Reply
yak far to much blood i feel like chucking,OH i did.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > titan69 | 10-Jan-04/8:23 AM | Reply
..there is so much blood because it represents my anger - which there is a LOT of...
[5] jonnyduk @ 217.137.173.89 | 30-Jun-04/4:24 PM | Reply
what the fuuuuuuuuuuuck???
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:44 PM | Reply
Appalling.
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