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The Blood

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jan 2004 · 6 comments

Running, Running away from my head I'm to stupid to even know what I've read Once I saw that paper, I bled I wiped the blood all over these words I can write, but it seems I cannot read what I've written The paper is what bitten me The blood seeps out now ; singing words now that it is free "Havoc is what I will cause for this man, Anger is what I will produce for this big fan." Is what he says Anger is its emotion That is my blood type ; It is smoother than lotion but sways in a a thick motion The amount of blood is growing I am swimming in a puddle of blood that is flowing Please don't touch the blood or you will be in trouble And my blood will double and then you will bleed also - making you turn into rubble Now give me a bucket and I will shovel the blood out So I will not be in the mood to pout So help me, help me, its seems like this will never clot This is way to abnormal! Am I scheduled to rot?

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[6] little_big_nose 9-Jan-04/8:08 PM Reply

it's good, but it gets a little repeatitive

[n/a] Blindpoetry › little_big_nose 9-Jan-04/8:18 PM Reply

ah yes... something I have a bit to much of in all my poetry... Repeatativness...

[2] titan69 10-Jan-04/12:44 AM Reply

yak far to much blood i feel like chucking,OH i did.

[n/a] Blindpoetry › titan69 10-Jan-04/8:23 AM Reply

..there is so much blood because it represents my anger - which there is a LOT of...

[5] jonnyduk 30-Jun-04/4:24 PM Reply

what the fuuuuuuuuuuuck???

[2] Edna Sweetlove 20-May-06/4:44 PM Reply

Appalling.