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Borders II (Free verse) by Patsy My body is tangled in invisible lines.
Some are heartier than others.
Some i like better than others.
A perimeter fence between
DO NOT ENTER and
Here, your Territory.
Your fingers inked in that habit
and i wish that your ink had been
more potent
and heady
and i wish i needed those marks.
Up the ladder:
The Western World
Down the ladder:
The Kid
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Posted: October 7, 2003 11:03 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2003 11:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7758822 Overall Rank: 11353 Comments:
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basit_i @ 209.148.205.103
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2-Nov-03/7:49 AM
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Well, to leave this out would be too...conspicuous :), and so, I am here. I shall say simply that the internal stirrings this implies are not unknown to my precincts. And now, I shall leave the confessional, and go about my work. they really should have the option of point-fives when voting--I'm always caught between rounding up or rounding down.
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