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Borders II

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

My body is tangled in invisible lines. Some are heartier than others. Some i like better than others. A perimeter fence between DO NOT ENTER and Here, your Territory. Your fingers inked in that habit and i wish that your ink had been more potent and heady and i wish i needed those marks.

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[8] basit_i 2-Nov-03/7:49 AM Reply
Well, to leave this out would be too...conspicuous :), and so, I am here. I shall say simply that the internal stirrings this implies are not unknown to my precincts. And now, I shall leave the confessional, and go about my work. they really should have the option of point-fives when voting--I'm always caught between rounding up or rounding down.