| Re: Ignored by PK |
2-Sep-02/7:52 PM |
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Seems barely poem-like. More just random thoughts. As a reflection, it is good. As poetry, it is muck. Yet, I understand exactly how you feel. So 7 for you.
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| Re: Daily Rutein by New Life Drug |
30-Aug-02/7:29 PM |
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Exactly, I'm glad SOMEONE notices it sucks. By the way, that was like the first piece of poem/songs I ever wrote
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| Re: Sawdust by New Life Drug |
15-Aug-02/9:15 PM |
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| Re: Dream Dead by New Life Drug |
9-Aug-02/5:30 PM |
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
9-Aug-02/5:26 PM |
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| Re: Tate Street 1956 by wunboi |
31-Jul-02/9:43 PM |
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sounds like a lovely summer memory, yet sad as it reveals what is happening to these people in their time
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| Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey |
31-Jul-02/9:41 PM |
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| Re: cold sonnet by <~> |
31-Jul-02/9:39 PM |
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reminds me of the setting in Evil Dead
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| Re: Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799 |
31-Jul-02/9:38 PM |
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| Re: He loves me by susie |
31-Jul-02/9:35 PM |
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
31-Jul-02/2:32 PM |
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Hey this would make an awesome song. Its definitely good.
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| Re: Porn by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/2:23 PM |
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Yeah, it does need some work. But I thought i'd let it out in its raw form. Just to see how shitty it could sound. Anywho, it's called "porn" because thats the reason my mom and I kinda left the house one day.. my mom got so pissed when my dad wasn't paying attention to her cuz he was too busy playin around with his porno channels. It really hurts her when she is ignored, and I can recognize that when they get in their little fights. She feels really alone, and my parents' actions rub off on me. This is pretty much how it felt. Plus the idea of porn sorta symbolizes something uncomfortable and the way I feel when life gets fucked up.
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| Re: UNTITLED by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/12:30 PM |
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| Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
31-Jul-02/11:13 AM |
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The first thing I did when I read this poem was laugh my ass off. Its so fuckin awesome.
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| Re: Why am I here? by harrytuttle |
31-Jul-02/11:09 AM |
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| Re: Before Existence by Jsylum |
31-Jul-02/11:08 AM |
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reminds me of something I once tried to say..
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| Re: To Be Rich by Bakar |
31-Jul-02/11:08 AM |
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BRAVO! BRAVO!!! fuckin awesome poem.
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| Re: Letter to the Horsehead Nebula by Tangerines |
31-Jul-02/11:04 AM |
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Once again, great poem. Good thoughts, good perspective. It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside. I'm not sure why. It must be a good thing.
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| Re: untitled by lazuli42 |
31-Jul-02/11:03 AM |
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| Re: fallen angel by josh_5o |
31-Jul-02/11:00 AM |
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You are a very odd person
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