on Ignored by PK
2 Sep 2002, 7:52 PM
Seems barely poem-like. More just random thoughts. As a reflection, it is good. As poetry, it is muck. Yet, I understand exactly how you feel. So 7 for you.
on Daily Rutein by New Life Drug
30 Aug 2002, 7:29 PM
Exactly, I'm glad SOMEONE notices it sucks. By the way, that was like the first piece of poem/songs I ever wrote
on Sawdust by New Life Drug
15 Aug 2002, 9:15 PM
gee, thanks! (sarcasm)
on Dream Dead by New Life Drug
9 Aug 2002, 5:30 PM
I'm a vegetarian. HA
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
9 Aug 2002, 5:26 PM
Awesome horus. As usual
on Tate Street 1956 by wunboi
31 Jul 2002, 9:43 PM
sounds like a lovely summer memory, yet sad as it reveals what is happening to these people in their time
on Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey
31 Jul 2002, 9:41 PM
i see...
on cold sonnet by <~>
31 Jul 2002, 9:39 PM
reminds me of the setting in Evil Dead
on Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799
31 Jul 2002, 9:38 PM
huh?
on He loves me by susie
31 Jul 2002, 9:35 PM
weird
on Porn by New Life Drug
31 Jul 2002, 2:23 PM
Yeah, it does need some work. But I thought i'd let it out in its raw form. Just to see how shitty it could sound. Anywho, it's called "porn" because thats the reason my mom and I kinda left the house one day.. my mom got so pissed when my dad wasn't paying attention to her cuz he was too busy playin around with his porno channels. It really hurts her when she is ignored, and I can recognize that when they get in their little fights. She feels really alone, and my parents' actions rub off on me. This is pretty much how it felt. Plus the idea of porn sorta symbolizes something uncomfortable and the way I feel when life gets fucked up.
on UNTITLED by New Life Drug
31 Jul 2002, 12:30 PM
why thank you!
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 11:13 AM
The first thing I did when I read this poem was laugh my ass off. Its so fuckin awesome.
on Why am I here? by harrytuttle
31 Jul 2002, 11:09 AM
uhhh right.
on Before Existence by Jsylum
31 Jul 2002, 11:08 AM
reminds me of something I once tried to say..
on To Be Rich by Bakar
31 Jul 2002, 11:08 AM
BRAVO! BRAVO!!! fuckin awesome poem.
on Letter to the Horsehead Nebula by Tangerines
31 Jul 2002, 11:04 AM
Once again, great poem. Good thoughts, good perspective. It gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside. I'm not sure why. It must be a good thing.
on fallen angel by josh_5o
31 Jul 2002, 11:00 AM
You are a very odd person