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To Be Rich (Free verse) by Bakar
To be rich It realy must be a bitch all the wine and dine spending your own dime buying some one elses time To be rich realy must be a bore how much for me to rent that whore all the money i have to spend just to be able to keep one friend To be rich have all my dreams counting all my green buy a very expensive car maybe take a trip to mars To be rich being on top far away from the dirt is it true money cant buy you love is it true money is the root of all evil To be poor man it realy sucks

Up the ladder: Arson

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.5
Overall Rank: 2693
Posted: July 10, 2002 7:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 7:29 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] forestchild7 @ 216.77.216.8 | 19-Jul-02/3:56 PM | Reply
cute and interesting idea...
[10] New Life Drug @ 64.175.37.174 | 31-Jul-02/11:08 AM | Reply
BRAVO! BRAVO!!! fuckin awesome poem.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.9 | 25-Aug-02/9:54 PM | Reply
Sounds more like lyrics, but if it is judged as a poem, I cannot understand why you stopped the rhyme scheme at the end. Did I miss something? The last line is weak.
[n/a] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 25-Aug-02/9:58 PM | Reply
well, p&k, yes.
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