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Dream Dead (Free verse) by New Life Drug
Dark eyes, she cries Cold stare, he's there Silent storm, crippled memories Standing alone, amongst vast seven seas Beside the ocean he waits She runs faster because she's late. Then out of no where, comes along. Sarinaded, she hears another man's song She's swept away but he's still waiting And the sun captures her from peace, but he's now forgotten. Forgotten Grey and blue, shallow mist He's still waiting for her empty kiss But he's forgotten now, as I said To her he is a ghost, but no where near dead Standing alone no more. The vast seven seas She hides the mysterious memories Beside himself he goes. He knows she's left his soul. Push back the waves, but no one cares 'cuz no one's there Push back the storm, but it still rains 'cuz the song has changed... AND SO HAVE YOU

Up the ladder: Final Goodbye
Down the ladder: Ego

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6240
Posted: August 9, 2002 5:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2002 5:06 PM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Aug-02/5:26 PM | Reply
pheasant.pleasant.peasant imagery...i may never wake up with an erection again "the bus gives you a hard on with books in your lap" "she bleed a catholic wedding". that is why i loved her, the most of all(jim morrison in "") 6/10 kinda simple, but simple can be good.meat is good.eat more meatu
[n/a] New Life Drug @ | 9-Aug-02/5:30 PM | Reply
I'm a vegetarian. HA
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