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Free verse № 7377

Final Goodbye

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Forever you will love me, you said The world stopped, as if it's only you and me I longed so much to declare the same I looked into your eyes, and I knew Oh, you do love me, true and deep But I also saw this love is just for a friend to keep I could only wish I'd have The courage and the strength, if not the will To look into your eyes and bid These feelings the most final of goodbyes.

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[7] horus8 4-Aug-02/12:12 AM Reply
now that's what i call communicating
[8] Ojiboch 4-Sep-02/3:58 AM Reply
Great Poem!
[8] little_big_nose 9-Jan-04/6:58 PM Reply
i also wish i had the strength, it's hard as hel, just know you aren't alone :)