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Final Goodbye (Free verse) by psychedelic Forever you will love me, you said
The world stopped, as if it's only you and me
I longed so much to declare the same
I looked into your eyes, and I knew
Oh, you do love me, true and deep
But I also saw this love is just for a friend to keep
I could only wish I'd have
The courage and the strength, if not the will
To look into your eyes and bid
These feelings the most final of goodbyes.
Up the ladder:
where once
Down the ladder:
Dream Dead
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Posted: August 3, 2002 11:43 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2002 11:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6237 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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4-Aug-02/12:12 AM
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now that's what i call communicating
Great Poem!
i also wish i had the strength, it's hard as hel, just know you aren't alone :)
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