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He loves me (Free verse) by susie
"He loves you, he loves you not" says the flower with only one leaf Another leaf falls "He loves you" says the flower with no leaves The sun starts shining and I say to myself, "He loves me"
Up the ladder: beauty
Down the ladder: Untitled 2
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2925
Posted: July 19, 2002 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2002 3:14 AM PDT
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[5] kawakurdi @ 213.122.160.68 | 19-Jul-02/11:13 AM | Reply
Nice calculation.
Leaf not leave [but leaves]
Better to let the sun tells you the good news:
The sun starts shining and whispers to me: He loves you!
[n/a] susie @ | 20-Jul-02/3:16 AM | Reply
I'm sorry, I changed it right away
I'm from the Netherlands and English isn't my best language
[8] New Life Drug @ 64.175.37.174 | 31-Jul-02/9:35 PM | Reply
weird
[10] god'swife @ 209.179.138.220 | 5-Sep-02/11:42 PM | Reply
thisd poem is absolutely beautiful.
[7] Yardbird @ 212.219.142.161 | 6-Nov-02/8:19 AM | Reply
Nice ideas, and well written - job's a good'un!
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