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He loves me

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jul 2002 · Edited 20 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

"He loves you, he loves you not" says the flower with only one leaf Another leaf falls "He loves you" says the flower with no leaves The sun starts shining and I say to myself, "He loves me"

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5 comments

[5] kawakurdi 19-Jul-02/11:13 AM Reply

Nice calculation.
Leaf not leave [but leaves]
Better to let the sun tells you the good news:
The sun starts shining and whispers to me: He loves you!

[n/a] susie 20-Jul-02/3:16 AM Reply

I'm sorry, I changed it right away
I'm from the Netherlands and English isn't my best language

[8] New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/9:35 PM Reply

weird

[10] god'swife 5-Sep-02/11:42 PM Reply

thisd poem is absolutely beautiful.

[7] Yardbird 6-Nov-02/8:19 AM Reply

Nice ideas, and well written - job's a good'un!