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He loves me (Free verse) by susie

"He loves you, he loves you not" says the flower with only one leaf Another leaf falls "He loves you" says the flower with no leaves The sun starts shining and I say to myself, "He loves me"

kawakurdi 19-Jul-02/11:13 AM
Nice calculation.
Leaf not leave [but leaves]
Better to let the sun tells you the good news:
The sun starts shining and whispers to me: He loves you!




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