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Untitled 2 (Free verse) by nightii juices flow
from tender lips
as hands hold tight
to trembling hips.
tongue probes deep,
through tender flesh
as bodies merge,
entwine, enmesh.
Up the ladder:
He loves me
Down the ladder:
Pagan ME King
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Posted: August 12, 2002 7:27 PM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 7:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.4482355 Overall Rank: 2926 Comments:
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nentwined @ 192.168.0.69
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12-Aug-02/8:31 PM
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very well put; sure, it's the same old same old, but I don't think I've seen it so concisely formed.
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