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Untitled 2 (Free verse) by nightii

juices flow from tender lips as hands hold tight to trembling hips. tongue probes deep, through tender flesh as bodies merge, entwine, enmesh.

nentwined 12-Aug-02/8:31 PM
very well put; sure, it's the same old same old, but I don't think I've seen it so concisely formed.




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