Re: Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus	26-Sep-03/11:23 AM
that's a lot of skin.
Re: Hope and Fear by debased	26-Sep-03/11:25 AM
wordy.
Re: consider the following by crwncka1	26-Sep-03/11:26 AM
i wont even begin an equal rights type of comment...
Re: Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT	26-Sep-03/11:27 AM
this is fun
Re: vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish	26-Sep-03/11:28 AM
i give this extra points because it mentions smoking!
Re: Take My Hand by milkymilk	26-Sep-03/11:31 AM
very pretty. i like the mollusk simile.
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	26-Sep-03/11:38 AM
i like this poem. it makes me feel so detached, as i'm sure you must have felt observing such a tragic event.
Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide	9-Oct-03/9:43 PM
modest rat? modest mouse? ehh? Ehh? (it's my favorite band). This makes me think of the sanitation worker strike in chicago (lots of rats).
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/9:47 PM
this is sad.. but i like it.
Re: The masquerade by vamos_tuzos	9-Oct-03/9:48 PM
sounds like fun!
Re: Luicidity by LucidRevelation	9-Oct-03/9:49 PM
smoking is fun! but seriously, i enjoyed this. smoke is a wonderful device to describe fluidity and infiltration.
Re: Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella	9-Oct-03/9:50 PM
hahaha, love it!
Re: The Last Battle by seebergerb	9-Oct-03/9:52 PM
i love similes. this is a great story as well as a poem, and the loss conveyed within it is very moving.
Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa	9-Oct-03/10:00 PM
i luh'dis shit! but not shit in a bad way, shit in a great way! like gold shit made from rubies too!
Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	9-Oct-03/10:05 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHA, it's funny cuz it's true. woops.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Oct-03/2:18 PM
way to rule a website. i'm sure it pays off severely in your personal life.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Nov-03/11:46 PM
let me just say first off, dissect this all you want, i've never been in tears before when i wrote something and i was this time... because i truly can't handle the slow-motion goodbye that started tonight...
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	30-Mar-04/10:48 AM
very IMPRESSIONable
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Apr-04/7:06 AM
wait, what about, instead of clothes, you say "wraps in gelatin"
Re: Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac	31-Oct-05/4:20 AM
backwards through magazines? if i were in japan, i wouldnt want to go back home either!