on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 2:18 PM
way to rule a website. i'm sure it pays off severely in your personal life.
on Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT
26 Sep 2003, 11:27 AM
this is fun
on Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus
26 Sep 2003, 11:23 AM
that's a lot of skin.
on Hope and Fear by debased
26 Sep 2003, 11:25 AM
wordy.
on consider the following by crwncka1
26 Sep 2003, 11:26 AM
i wont even begin an equal rights type of comment...
on vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish
26 Sep 2003, 11:28 AM
i give this extra points because it mentions smoking!
on Take My Hand by milkymilk
26 Sep 2003, 11:31 AM
very pretty. i like the mollusk simile.
on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
26 Sep 2003, 11:38 AM
i like this poem. it makes me feel so detached, as i'm sure you must have felt observing such a tragic event.
on The Last Battle by seebergerb
9 Oct 2003, 9:52 PM
i love similes. this is a great story as well as a poem, and the loss conveyed within it is very moving.
on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa
9 Oct 2003, 10:00 PM
i luh'dis shit! but not shit in a bad way, shit in a great way! like gold shit made from rubies too!
on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide
9 Oct 2003, 9:43 PM
modest rat? modest mouse? ehh? Ehh? (it's my favorite band). This makes me think of the sanitation worker strike in chicago (lots of rats).
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2003, 9:47 PM
this is sad.. but i like it.
on The masquerade by vamos_tuzos
9 Oct 2003, 9:48 PM
sounds like fun!
on Luicidity by LucidRevelation
9 Oct 2003, 9:49 PM
smoking is fun! but seriously, i enjoyed this. smoke is a wonderful device to describe fluidity and infiltration.
on Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella
9 Oct 2003, 9:50 PM
hahaha, love it!
on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus
9 Oct 2003, 10:05 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHA, it's funny cuz it's true. woops.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 11:46 PM
let me just say first off, dissect this all you want, i've never been in tears before when i wrote something and i was this time... because i truly can't handle the slow-motion goodbye that started tonight...
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
30 Mar 2004, 10:48 AM
very IMPRESSIONable
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2004, 7:06 AM
wait, what about, instead of clothes, you say "wraps in gelatin"
on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac
31 Oct 2005, 4:20 AM
backwards through magazines? if i were in japan, i wouldnt want to go back home either!