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The masquerade (Free verse) by vamos_tuzos
A masquerade ball initiated by a bell. Faces hidden for fear of discovery, Any sign of hope given in recovery. Falsification of grandure and misleading, souls searching for love and reading. Attempts to hide and to lose reason, songs rythmical beat causing physical treason. Sensual movements of bodies touching, mouths open lips pressing and hands clutching.

Up the ladder: Love Me Please
Down the ladder: let me lie

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4444447
Weighted score: 5.2222223
Overall Rank: 4317
Posted: July 5, 2002 3:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2002 3:47 PM PDT
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[7] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.107.157 | 6-Jul-02/11:26 AM | Reply
BRIAN ENO
[n/a] vamos_tuzos @ | 7-Jul-02/11:05 AM | Reply
How so?
[6] FreeFormFixation @ 216.125.247.11 | 9-Oct-03/9:48 PM | Reply
sounds like fun!
[7] deleted user @ 65.100.247.29 | 24-Jul-04/1:20 AM | Reply
short and to the point.
it perfectly describes the general mood of the event, though still vague in a "you'd have to know to know" kind of way.
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