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The Last Battle (Free verse) by seebergerb
The inspiration I found in the heart of where
inspiration is supposed to be, fled into the
horizon where nothing lives. Even the wind,
my muse of ordinary contraption, fled
for warmer islands. My trees color black
and crumble to ash. The stench is unbearable,
like a crowd of angry fans who now feel
betrayed, hated, and left alone.
The waves that used to sing only mutter
monotonous chants now, like old monks
lost in the maze of their cloisture.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1
Weighted score: 4.05
Overall Rank: 13344
Posted: May 26, 2002 10:01 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2002 10:01 AM PDT
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