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Take My Hand (Free verse) by milkymilk
When your soft hands brushes mine
the sensation, the feeling, its oh so fine
a thousand emotions I feel from the first touch
Jovialness, excitement, sensations of much
How is that, our hands always find each other
How is that, the seat you pick, we're always together
I can't say we're destined or we met by chance
this bond we share pierces the world like a wall with a supernatural
lance
love is never perfect, so I can't say your perfect for me
but come with me, together we can set ourselves free
out of misery and this world's servitude
and to combat people's hostile attitudes
about us, nothing can stop us
love is built with: devotion, heart, and trust
you are so rare and truly I am grateful
i love your inner beauty, it is the most beautiful
as a mollusk's shell is ellaborate, winding curves, like beautiful
ladders
but the inside, the living, the most important, is all that matters
please take my hand and join me on the journey we call life
lets grow closer, until we are one, strong to combat strife
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Posted: January 20, 2003 2:56 AM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2003 2:56 AM PST
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